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Stryker, I love your story beginning. Very suspenseful -- I was riveted. I made a few spelling and punctuation corrections for you. I really do love your story, and can't wait to see where it goes! Jigsaw

Page Move

I have changed the story name from "title TROPICAL RAIN" to "Tropical Rain". I am willing to change it back, but I assumed the title was created in error. If you want to create a story with a certain title, then in the create a page table on the Help:Beginning a Story page, you replace the word "title" with the title of your story. Aaron Roth 16:40, 24 August 2008 (UTC)