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Detective story. Keep to the feel.

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Ray-Ban man has potential, but the start is very cliche. Someone could develop this into something interesting, though. It does have the potential if someone with creative ideas would take it a few more steps. (<<written by Jigsaw, moved from the Reviews page.)

Yes, "cliche" is really the right word for this. But it could be the beginning of a good script for a TV show or a movie. it has that feel to it. Paperweight 23:11, 18 June 2008 (EDT)