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I like how it begins and ends with the same line, and the last 3 lines are a cool way to end. I hope to see more of your work! L iteratus 12:13, 15 June 2008 (EDT)

MnMsbeatSkittles - Your poem is really exquisite. I can't think of any changes or edits I would like to make. Maybe others will, but your poem is excellent. I hope you have more work to contribute. I would like to see it! Jigsaw 18:06, 15 June 2008 (EDT)